Monday, January 20, 2014

Spelling & Dictation: Tumult at the Beach

Breathing in the salty tang of the sea breeze, I take a slow walk along the beach, enjoying the wind as it ruffles my hair. My gaze wanders out to the sea, where families are cavorting in the water and giggling merrily. A girl abruptly stumbles and falls in the water with a huge splash, and my breath catches in my throat even as she surfaces shortly after, none the worse for wear. Memories of an unpleasant incident in the past come flooding rapidly back, and I shudder involuntarily.
            The day began much like this day, with clear skies and a scorching sun. Leaping exuberantly out of the car, I tore down the pavement to the beach, not bothering to wait for the rest of the family to catch up. It had been so long since I last swam in the sea, and I was thrilled that my parents had finally agreed to a family outing at the beach once the school holidays started. Grinning from ear to ear, I took off my slippers and plunged my toes into the cool, wet sand.
            “Zach, please watch out for Peter. Don’t stray too far!” my mother yelled.
            My mother was a worrywart, and hardly a day would pass without her constant nagging. Waving a hand nonchalantly back, I ignored my younger brother’s pleas to wait for him and promptly waded into the water, relishing the feel of the warm waves around me.
            Gamboling in the sea, I was having the time of my life, wondering how much better the day could get when a shrill shriek suddenly caught my ear. I stopped swimming, treading water on the spot.
            What can be happening? Whipping my head around, I searched the waves for the source of the yell. My gaze fell on a commotion not far from me.
            “Help!” a shout came again from that same direction. Someone was struggling in the water, flailing his limbs about in all directions. A head briefly rose above the water, spluttering and gasping before disappearing again under the waves.
            Squinting my eyes against the glare of the sun, I made out that he was wearing a familiar dark blue suit with neon-yellow stripes, and sported the same white goggles my brother had. My jaw dropped and my heart somersaulted in my chest when a cold realisation hit me. My brother is in trouble!
            Feeling as if my heart would seize up, I immediately started to swim over, kicking my legs as hard as I could. My blood roared in my ears from the effort and I could not shake the sense of foreboding that had settled over me.
            Just as I was within reach of my brother, a burly swimmer appeared from the other side and encircled my sibling with his strong arms.
            “Hold on, boy, you are going to be all right!” the man boomed as he hoisted half of my brother’s body out of the water. With powerful strokes, he swam back towards the shore, supporting my sibling’s head above the water while I trailed behind.
            Upon reaching the shore, the man swiftly carried my brother up the beach, laying him on the ground a safe distance from the water. I dashed to my brother’s side, joining my parents who seeing what had transpired, had immediately sprinted over to us.
            “Peter! Are you all right?” my mother asked anxiously as she crouched next to my brother. He grimaced and howled in pain, gesturing towards his legs. My mother shot me a reproachful look while my father stood over us, his brow creased and his face ashen. Why did I not keep a close eye on my brother? Guilt gnawed at me from the inside and I hung my head. Within moments, a lifeguard dressed in red and yellow had joined my parents and me.
            “Please, give him some air. I believe he is suffering from leg cramps,” he advised. He then proceeded to help my brother with some leg-stretching exercises and gently massaged his thighs and calves, in a bid to relieve his muscle cramps.
            Gradually, my brother stopped groaning and his face visibly relaxed. My parents heaved a huge sigh of relief. The lifeguard, seeing that my brother was now much better, advised my parents to let him take plenty of fluids and avoid strenuous exercise over the next few hours.
            “He had probably swum too vigorously and was not properly hydrated before the swim. Please make sure he gets plenty of rest,” he cautioned. My parents and I thanked the lifeguard profusely, and quickly sought out the man who had saved my brother’s life to express our utmost gratitude.
            I subsequently apologised to my mother for not heeding her instructions and for the rest of the day, I made special concessions for Peter, hoping the nice treatment would help to ease his traumatic experience.
            Nevertheless, Peter refused to venture anywhere near a waterbody for the next month in fear that the same thing would happen to him. However, he gradually recovered his nerve and slowly picked up swimming again.
            Turning my head back, I wait for my brother to catch up and take his hand before continuing our walk along the beach. Although six months have passed since the incident, I still feel regret whenever we come to the beach. Looking back, I realised my impatience could have cost my brother his life. Vigilance is important whenever there are possible dangers, and I never wish to put my family members at such risk again.

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Wednesday, January 15, 2014

Heartbeats in the Dark (A Strange Noise)

Heartbeats in the Dark


 Da-da-DUM! Da-da-DUM!
I’m in my room, drumming. It helps me when I’m feeling scared.
Am I scared?
Yes.
Why?
One reason –strange noise. It’s mysterious. It’s loud. It comes from somewhere near me.
And – da-da-dum, da-da-dum!

“Where is the noise coming from? Is it coming from the wardrobe? Or is it from under the bed? ” I walk to the wardrobe and check. Then I walk to the bed and peep under the bed. Nothing! Strange! It is not in the wardrobe , neither is it from the bed. Where can it be? Where is the noise?

Mum’s getting mad. I can tell by the beat of her words.
Hurry up. Da-da-DUM!
“Darren!” We’ve got to go.
Mum’s going to have a baby. I’m scared of that, too, but I’m more scared of Bess.
Got to go.

In the car, I nod my head a lot.
“Yes, Mum, got my school stuff.” “Yes, Mum, got my toothbrush.” “Yes, I’ll remember to ring Pop.” Pop’s my grandfather. He’s forgetful and wrinkly. He lives by himself, and every night I phone him before I go to bed. It’s just something I do. It reminds him to go to bed, too. Mum hugs me. I can tell she’s scared as well.

Aunt Billie is Bess’s mum. That night, she shows me up to a little room in the attic.
“There’s no ceiling light up here,” she says. “Bess is bringing up a lamp for you.”
Then Aunt Billie goes downstairs and leaves me with the dreaded Bess. Bess plugs in the lamp, and her eyes glint in an evil kind of way in its glare.
My heart bangs in my chest, in my throat, and between my ears. Why? Because my most secret secret is that I’m scared of the dark. Really, really scared of the dark. And I know Bess knows.
I see Bess’s smile slide around her face. “Let’s play shadow puppets,” she says.

She puts the lamp on the floor, pointing at the wall. She looms over me, making monsters, bats, dragons, and wolves on the wall right beside my head. At last, when it’s totally dark outside, she gets bored with scaring me. She leaves, with the lamp. I am so scared I can’t move. Dum-da-dum-da-dum-da …
I lie in bed, drumming my fingers on the wall. My ears feel as big as elephants’ ears as I listen to every little sound. My throat is so tight I can’t swallow my spit. Then suddenly I remember Pop. What am I going to do? Pop always gets this call from me. If I don’t ring him, he won’t go to bed, and he might worry about me.

I open my eyes. It’s hard doing that. Usually if it’s dark, I keep them shut so I can pretend it’s not dark. Crazy? So? Everyone’s got a bit of crazy in them – Pop told me that once.
I sit up. I can’t breathe because the dark is so black it feels like it’s suffocating me. I stare at where I know the curtains are. I tell myself that the sun’s blazing the other side of that curtain. If I can just get to them, yank them open …

I put one foot out of bed.
Da-dum-da-dum-da-dum.
I listen to my heartbeat and make my feet walk in time to the beat.
Da-dum-da-dum-da-dum.
Curtain – pull!
I can see black roofs and black trees, extra black in the blackness. Hey, there’s more than one kind of blackness – I never knew that.
I suck in a ball of air, swallow it, and feel my way down the stairs.
Da-dum-da-dum-da-dum.

The phone! Got it! I feel for the right buttons.
“Hi Pop!”
When I race back up to bed, I’m so happy. I can’t get to sleep – I just lie there listening to my heartbeat going “Did it. Did it. Did it.” Next morning, Aunt Billie comes in early, before it’s light.
“You’ve got a sister,” she says.
I smile. I reckon I’ve been smiling all night in my sleep.
“Where’s the lamp, Darren?” asks Aunt Billie.

“Bess took it,” I say. “She’s scared of the dark, so I let her have it beside her bed.” 

Wednesday, January 1, 2014

Sample Composition : Bee Attack

Bee Attack
One sunny and windy day, my best friend, Sam, and I were going on an excursion with our class to Labrador Park. When we reached Labrador Park, we saw a rambutan tree with big juicy rambutans. When we got down the bus, we followed our teacher to research on some mini creatures. Sam was getting thirsty while I was getting hungry. Sam came to me and said, "Hey buddy, let’s go to the rambutan tree without letting the teacher know. I’m thirsty." I replied, "That is a good idea." 

            We secretly walked away from our classmates. I stopped and said, "Will we get lost?" Sam replied softly, "I have already been to Labrador Park a hundred times. Do you think we will get lost?" I was speechless and I led the way to the rambutan tree. When we reached there, we were drooling over the rambutans. Sam looked at me with his eyes wide open. 

            Sam squatted on the floor with his knees bent. He asked me to climb on his back to get on the tree. I said, "Can you take my weight? I am heavy." "Yes, I will try," Sam replied. I muttered to myself, "Don’t regret it, Sam!" I stepped on his back and heard some buzzing noise. I thought it was Sam moaning so I continued to climb up the tree. 

            When I reached the branch, I was about to take the rambutans when I heard Sam saying, "Edwin, be careful of the bees on top of you." I looked up and was visibly shaken when I saw the bees. I looked down and saw Sam running away. I accidentally broke the branch and fell down. The branch dropped on my leg and I couldn’t move. 

            Suddenly, a swam of bees flew down and stung me. I tried to run away but my leg was broken. Just then, my teacher sprayed some Baygon on the bees and the bees died. My face was swollen and puffy. I told myself not to forgive Sam. 

            When I got to the hospital, Sam came to visit me with my teacher. Sam apologized to me and my teacher told me that it was Sam who told her that I was attacked by bees. I forgave Sam and we were friends again. I learnt not to walk away without my teacher’s permission.


Unit 1: Composition Pre-Writing : Bee Attack FTRs Chart

Pre-writing: Video Viewing Sheet
 Have you ever been stung by a bee?  How would you feel, what thoughts would be going though your mind and how would you react (FTRs)?   Watch these videos and observe how the people in the video react when stung by a bee.  Note how other people around them also reacted.

My Observations –Bee Attack

Video Title
Victim’s Reaction
(What did he say?  What did he do?)
Reactions of Other People
(What did they say? What did they do?
Other Observations.
Did the victim disturb the bees initially?
How did the victim escape from the bees?
Describe the injuries the victim sustained (if any).

Bees Attack during Soccer Match













Man Survived Bee Attack













How to Survive a Bee Attack











Unit 1: Composition Pre-writing Ex : Bee Attack Videos (Fill in FTR Chart)

Videos of Bee Attacks

·        How to survive a bee attack

·        Bees attack during soccer game

·        Bees attack tree worker

Unit 1 : Heartbeats in the Dark

Words associated with fear.
11.    Gasped
22.    Horrified
33.    Petrified
44.    Panic filled
55.    Throat was dry
66.    Gripped by fear
77.    Completely numb
88.    Knees knocking wildly
99.    His mouth was so dry that he could not speak
110. Stood rooted to the ground
111. The silence deepened
112. Paralysed with fright
113. Heart pounded fiercely
114.  A look of horror on his face
115. Trembling/ shaking with fear
116. Dumbfounded/ speechless with fear
117. Heart skipped a beat
118. Heart was pumping like an African drum
119. A chill went down my spine
220. Knees went soft like jelly
221. Cowered in a corner
222. Was at a loss for words

Dictation
          Sam squatted on the floor with his knees bent. He asked me to climb on his back to get on the tree. I said, "Can you take my weight? I am heavy." "Yes, I will try," Sam replied. I muttered to myself, "Don’t regret it, Sam!" I stepped on his back and heard some buzzing noise. I thought it was Sam moaning so I continued to climb up the tree.
            When I reached the branch, I was about to take the rambutans when I heard Sam saying, "Edwin, be careful of the bees on top of you." I looked up and was visibly shaken when I saw the bees. I looked down and saw Sam running away. I accidentally broke the branch and fell down. The branch dropped on my leg and I couldn’t move.

A light breeze caressed my cheeks as I stepped into the park. I breathed in gulp after gulp of cool, fresh air as I enjoyed the wide variety of lush, tropical plants spread out around me. I could hear the birds singing and the crickets chirping. Being surrounded by nature was pure bliss. 

A group of students and a teacher were attacked at Labrador Park by a swarm of aggressive bees.
Swatting the bees will result in the crushed bee emitting a chemical scent that would attract other bees to attack.
Pest-control experts say that flailing your arms or killing a bee will only provoke the bees.
Hanging by just a thin thread, a beehive hung precariously on the tree branch.
Without a backward glance, I scuttled off, heart hammering a mile a minute.
I let out a shriek and took to my heels.
Screaming incoherently, I ran towards the pond – the only means of escape from the persistent bees.
Fear lent wings to my feet as I ran helter-skelter from the bees.
The elderly woman suffered stings on her face and arms and she was taken to the hospital for treatment.
He hunkered down in a corner and covered his nose and mouth.